According to the Constitution f1988, every individual has guaranteed access to healthcare. However, in practice, the law is distorted, as there are obstacles in the field of mental health in contemporary times. This scenario occurs because of the distorted view of professions such as psychologists and psychiatrists and media influences. (Improve the contextualization of the topic and the formulation of the thesis)
(Good cohesive strategy) In a first analysis, the need to value professionals in the field of psychology and psychiatry must be highlighted. In this way, such professions are mistakenly seen as solutions only for crazy people, a large part of the population is prejudiced and it is very common to hear (Two points) «I’m not crazy enough to go to a psychologist» in the behavior of many citizens. According to the World Health Organization (WHO), being healthy is not just the absence of illness or disease, but physical, mental and social well-being. Therefore, for the role of psychologists to be effective in the Brazilian reality, it is necessary for the Public Power to act strongly (Comma) in order to finance the costs. In this way, society will be far from the reality experienced by the protagonist of the film «Joker», Arthur Fleck, since he suffered from mental disorders and did not have the funds to cover the costs of consultations, treatments, medicines and the help of a psychologist. (Did not understand the topic. Discussion developed tangentially)
(Good cohesive strategy) Furthermore, media influences have a strong impact on today’s society. This is proven by the silencing of information outlets on the issue of mental health, given that the internet is one of the main means of communication with the greatest reach among the population. In this sense, social networks aim to publicize issues with the aim of guiding citizens. However, when used by young people it ends up being an object of influence according to the Habitus Theory, by sociologist Pierre Bourdieu, which states (Two points) «Actions are imposed, naturalized and standardized by society.» Therefore, most young people want to be part of the «standard» of famous people and celebrities, because they are important people in society. So, the internet ends up being one of the crucial points for the manifestation of mental problems, because it disseminates the «perfection of famous people» which is not always achieved by young people and can trigger future illnesses such as depression. (Tangential approach to the proposed topic)
(Good cohesive strategy) Therefore, so that there are no obstacles to mental health in contemporary times, it is up to the Public Power to (Good. Introduced the agent) create community spaces to increase the appreciation of the work of psychologists and psychiatrists through government funds, and the media disseminate pertinent information that helps the population to carry out self-analysis and seek help (Comma) in order to mitigate cases of mental problems in society. Thus, the green and yellow nation will see the Magna Carta corroborated. (The intervention proposal is incomplete)