In the movie “Matilda” (Comma) the protagonist is a child who lives in a completely dysfunctional family, in which neglect in various aspects, from being alone to psychological violence (Improve sense making). Outside of fiction, the growing number of children who suffer domestic violence is notable, this is evident both through mental trauma and physical aggression that can culminate in death. (Very well. Formulated the thesis)In this sense, it is necessary to find measures that alert the authorities about this terrifying and silent practice.
In view of this aspect, it is worth highlighting that in article 17 of the Child and Adolescent Statute (ECA), (No comma) brings the importance of respect for the inviolability of the physical, moral and psychological integrity of children and adolescents. However, what can be seen are very serious damages being inflicted on these vulnerable people, who are often invisible to society, since the biggest abusers are within of their homes, which thus results in (Without comma) or no silencing the victim. In this sense, the consequences for psychological abuse experienced during personal maturation, (No comma) are felt for the rest of their lives, such as low self-esteem, sadness, aggression and even losses in school performance (Improve the presentation of this discussion)Therefore, it is imperative that state power ensures more effective monitoring of its laws and promotes severe punishments for offenders, so that stories like that of the girl Isabella Nardoni are not repeated.
(Good cohesive strategy) Furthermore, it is worth remembering that violence against children dates back to the times of Aantiquity, since some cities – such as Sparta – sacrificed disabled children or abandoned them to be devoured by wolves, as they considered them not fit to be warriors. Likewise, annually, according to the Brazilian Society of Pediatrics (SBP), an average of 200 children under the age of four die from aggression (Improve the relationship between discussions).Unfortunately, this common practice is underreported by the authorities and who should protect them protect themin fact, it’s the one who puts them most at risk. It’s heartbreaking, (No comma) verify that the country that is a signatory to Human Rights, (No comma) do not care for the integrity and well-being of its small citizens.
(Good cohesive strategy) It is urgent, therefore, to search for the identification of signs and factors that lead to bad–treatment of children. In view of this, the government, within the scope of the Ministry of Education – the body responsible for the transmission and training of teaching professionals, must promote educational strategies, such as the day of «Open listening«, through lectures and workshops on the topic of identifying violence, with trained psychologists and teachers, so that students feel safe when talking about the abuse they suffered. The hope is to achieve a relationship of trust and respect between professionals and children, as seen in the film Matilda, and the cycle of silence is finally broken. (Very well. You presented all the elements of the intervention proposal)